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Great First Line?

Posted in Uncategorized, writing with tags , , , , , , , on May 13, 2009 by stanleyriiks

“The front door opened and I stabbed the key into her eye, feeling the optic fluid spurt across my forearm, taking a breath, feeling the warm blood bubble against my closed fist; I pulled the key out, feeling the teeth grating against bone…”

Now all I’ve gotta do is come up with the rest of the story!